phobia Taapero
Viestien lukumäärä : 50 Ikä : 33 Registration date : 01.11.2008
| Aihe: Phobia säätää ja poksauttaa pääsi jutuillaan.... taas. 17.09.09 22:53 | |
| Eli pistin tänne muutaman runon kyhäelmän, mitä olen tehnyt...
Death and Hatred
we kill for love.. in love we kill.. when we are angry we kill.... we kill for reason.... and whithout one ... we kill for killing.... thinking " I'm better than anybody else! " while we are lower than animals... kiling for money and money for killing.... our history isn't anything else than killig and hatred.... Milions and billions are dead and for what..? for one foot of land that one can't keep himself after death.... there isn't anything valuable under the Sun.... meaningles and futile.... we die and in death we can't have anything.... and everyhting why we killed is gone and turning to ashes... so what is value of life..? nothing is value of us... nobody has anything and nobody can't have anything.... still we kill...we repeate our mistakes untill the very end.
Seuraava runo jota en ole nimennyt...
Empty swing Empty yard Nothing moves Wind is silent and I I'm still waiting everyone waits with me Until she comes back in her black dress
She will find me She will talk to me She will break my silence and I will welcome her as an old friend
I'll sit in the tree and she will use the swing
She'll bring life to my yard birds will sing for her and flowers bloom just for her
Yard will have new life
I feel tired and sleapy She close my eyes and guard my sleap Wind blows gently and I will shatter into notingness
She looks the place where I was for a while then she too will disapear leaving behind only one tear when it shatters into the ground Yard's time will start once again
Ewerything will rot away
The Yard is once again
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MilliVanilli Siivousfriikki
Viestien lukumäärä : 383 Ikä : 36 Registration date : 22.07.2007
| Aihe: Vs: Phobia säätää ja poksauttaa pääsi jutuillaan.... taas. 19.02.10 17:34 | |
| Vau. Tuon ensimmäisen värssyn sanomasta pidin kovasti, vaikken runouden päälle lapsellisen riimittelyn lisäksi mitään ymmärräkään. Toinen taas oli hyvinkin kaunis ja romanttinen, mutta ehkä vähän turhan pitkä. Mielestäni se olisi toiminut paremmin lyhyempänä. Mun mielestäni jo pelkästään alla oleva pätkä on niin kaunis, ettei loppua tarvita. <3 Olispa munkin mies tuollainen runoniekka, mutta ei. - Lainaus :
- Empty swing
Empty yard Nothing moves Wind is silent and I I'm still waiting everyone waits with me Until she comes back in her black dress
She will find me She will talk to me She will break my silence and I will welcome her as an old friend | |
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